“Growing Up”
The first signs of spring are starting to show. These daffodils just started to pop through the soil this past week.
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“Growing Up”
The first signs of spring are starting to show. These daffodils just started to pop through the soil this past week.
The Triple B 
Really like the DoF in this image, kinda wish the composition was shifted a tad to the right (off centre a little but more) but, that’s me! 🙂 nice job and good luck with your 366!
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David,
Thanks for the comment and the critique. just wondering why you would like it more to the right? My intention was to have a diagonal line in the image and to have equal spacing on the left and right of the plants which I think I did well.
Is your intention to have more “white space” on the upper-left two-thirds and then the image be on the lower right?
Thanks again for the comment. Please reply back, I would love to recompose it your way just to see the difference.
Brad
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Hey Brad, I like your idea of having the diagonal line and it would appear you could still do that if the crop was to remove the lower and right side a little bit. Personally, my view keeps wanting to focus on the first sprout which appears to be out of focus a tad unlike the larger sprout behind it. It’s like my eyes are battling to distinguish which is the main subject. Perhaps having more in-focus area more in the lower right quadrant eliminating part of the out of focus area in the really lower right corner would do it. I dunno Brad, it’s hard to explain! Crop or not, I do like the image! 😀
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David,
Thanks again for the comment. I posted a re-cropped version under the original post. See for yourself if I made a god adjustment. I think it is a valid one, and thanks for the critique and best of luck with your new adventures in becoming a pro.
Brad
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I like it, perhaps bring it out a tad to capture that piece of wood in it’s entirety?
I look forward to your future posts.
Thank you for the well wishes, I’ve got a long road ahead but, it’s gonna be a fun road! 😀
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makes me want to reach down and shake hands with the little guys
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